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sspikedudley 20-08-2004 09:01 AM

the arms are in proportion to this picture which the rest of the body is made from but i think they look a little long because they are a little to thin
thanks for the input though i may change them later
http://www.wakehosting.com/upload/fi...aptor_male.jpg

sspikedudley 20-08-2004 10:27 AM

feet are now changed and the claws are much better now but i still want to know if they are good enough thanks well here he is
http://www.wakehosting.com/upload/fi...render_029.jpg
textured view
http://www.wakehosting.com/upload/fi...render_030.jpg

Krull 20-08-2004 08:28 PM

Looks nice ( I never had a prob with arms looks fine either way)
a lil Crit: the only thing that throws me off is the throaght /neck I like the 2D pic u supplied where throaght/neck is exteneded and not squashed in.

bullet_evader 21-08-2004 06:41 AM

its starting to come all together spikedudley!!! i like the texture you give to him. not sure about the bump map though!! dont looks like skin-texture much or something!! maybe you should give it a second look!!!

anyhow, the rest is very good!! keep on going

sspikedudley 21-08-2004 10:50 AM

thanks for the comments guys

Krull : the neck is the same as in the picture maybe its just prespective

Bullet : the Bump texture is still in progress and i have to start work on a scale texture in photoshop
a small update
http://www.wakehosting.com/upload/fi...render_031.jpg

Fallenswordsman 21-08-2004 02:42 PM

Like Bullet, I think the bumpmap still needs a little work, but this is coming together nicely! Greatly!

Krull 21-08-2004 06:46 PM

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Here is what I mean. this is the one thing that catches my eye and annoys me ( not being rude ) everything else is perfect ( ecepically claws)

sspikedudley 23-08-2004 12:38 PM

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sorted out some problems thanks for everyones suggestions
neck sorted
new bump
underarm tweaked

Zeeman 23-08-2004 03:08 PM

looking pretty good so far!:)

Krull 23-08-2004 05:10 PM

MUCH BETTER!

s2-speedy 23-08-2004 05:32 PM

i like ur dino, but like i sed to cyroz it looks like a raptor,i thought the comp was 2 create ur own style of dinosaur so r u goin 2 change nethin on the model 2 make it less like a raptor. or are u aloud to jsut make a normal dino. i dont know.

nice model.

ozwolf 23-08-2004 10:30 PM

looking good spike,

bullet_evader 24-08-2004 06:55 AM

good work you are doing here spike!!!

sspikedudley 24-08-2004 06:58 AM

thnaks everyone

S2-Speedy - my dinosuar is going to be a modified raptor so after i have all the raptor details down i am going to start modifying it

does everyone like the new bump map then

s2-speedy 24-08-2004 01:21 PM

ok cool. i fort u might b modifiyin it. i was just curious.

i like ur bumpmap it better than the last. lookin gud.


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