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vedic kings 29-08-2005 07:22 PM

This is awesome!

One thing I would add though is motion blur to the fly in the frontground. Like the wings etc.

doosterproductions 29-08-2005 09:06 PM

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Thanks vedic kings! I like the idea of motion blur as it really creates more action and movement in the scene. but I do not want to blur the mosquito too much. I blurred the wings somewhat and the entire body very subtly. Please give comments, crit, and/or compl. Thanks.

doosterproductions 29-08-2005 09:37 PM

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Here is another render, not much difference but a tad more blur than the previous. Please give comments, crit, and/or compl. Thanks.

doosterproductions 30-08-2005 02:58 AM

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Sorry, but I am not sure about the motion blur so I keep trying different stuff. Here is one with no blur on the body, just on the wings. Please give comments, crit, and/or compl. Thanks

doosterproductions 30-08-2005 05:14 AM

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Here is yet another render. This one also has no blur on the body and less blur on the wings, but enough so it looks like they're moving. Please give comments, crit, and/or compl. Also please say which one you think I should go with or a combination or no blur at all. Thanks.

doosterproductions 30-08-2005 05:15 AM

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Sorry about that, saved the image in the wrong format. I don't know if anyone could see that so here is a better one.

doosterproductions 30-08-2005 05:16 AM

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Still not working:headbang:. One more try.

CrazyMerlin 30-08-2005 05:35 AM

I think the whole blue thing on the wings and body should be removed, IMHO.

The front bug looked great before you started playing with the blur, now it looks ok.

Revert before it's too late, dude.

~~CM!

doosterproductions 30-08-2005 11:47 AM

Thanks CrazyMerlin. After trying out the different settings and then looking back at it with no blur, I think I agree. Thanks for the advice, I will probably use the image on the previous page as my final.

sandfish 30-08-2005 02:54 PM

hi Dooster
i must say u have a very original concept and u got it to high quality in 3d. good work!
the earlier render was better, i think also
good luck:beer:


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