Hi everybody
 

I have been working on a few new cartoon models
this WE
i post some Picts
they are not textured well
but i apreciate critics on them

the rest
 

i ll post one by one.. :p

a pinguin
 

and the last at list

the shark looks pretty good, but the top gums look kinda funny.
the eagle looks the best, but if you are going to animate it, i'd make the arms a little longer, don't know about the flat top head.

the penguin? it's a sad creature :( I think the toes need a little rounding.

thanks for you advices :)
i dont know what a gums is :)
sorry i am french and i dont understand slang
for now on the eagle isn't gonna be animate yet, if i do, i'll have to create it with the spread wings
for the head it comes from my drawing..
dunno if i have change it because for my part it does not anoy me....
for the penguin i'll have to rework it i think.. but yes it is a sad creature :)

Gums are the jaw tissue that hold your teeth in place.

In french I think the word is 'gencive' (but I could be wrong).

gums
 

no mark you are right this is called gencives in french :)