Airport
 

This has been posted over at the Newtek forums,
I just want as much feedback as possible.

I worked on this scene for about a week, tweaking and fixing...
The airplanes in the background came with LW8 so they aren´t mine, the rest is.

I concider this work finished, but all comments are welcome!

It may just be me, but some of the scale looks ever so slightly off (ie: Trashcans too big, trollies too small and doors a little too small).


Apart from that though - cool render.

I agree with mark, the doors are at the same size as the trashcans. the rest is looking real nice. I like the lightning you've put on this image.

Pretty cool render. I don't know if it's just me, but your render kind of reminds me of Pixar. Just not as polished.

Thank you all for your responses and comments,

I have done some errors in the scale of things, I haven´t gone in and checked it all, but I do beleive I made the railings on the escalators a bit too high, the trashcans a bit too high, the doors are to scale that I know...

In my upcoming work I will put more research on the actual size of things, instead of guessing.

Agree with previous comments. Nice job.

I like it. Aside from the above mentioned scale issues, the only thing I see is that the carts seem really dull looking kinda like a clay render. I would add more specularity and/or reflection to them. Also the escalator sides look really dull aswell I would try adding a lot more reflection to them to make them resemble an escalator better. Here is a pic I found on google to kind of show you what I think the metal should look like. But this is just my opinion. It's your render so you do whatever suits you.
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~jn8k-nmk...-escalator.jpg

Airport
 

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The doors are fine as far as scaling just looking at the image.
Minor adjustments on the overall "Airport" will be nice.
Great work though...keep the good work.

has a lot of promise aside from a few scaling issues imo - but nice