Room
 

Very Basic - no textures applied - still in progress.

C&C please...........

Good start, but seems very "stale" or blocky to me, reminds me of my college dorm room on steroids. I think it would be better for me to comment once I see some textures on this. Not trying to sound negative, but there really isn't alot to go on here.

Hoop

Okay, I'm not going to say much because I'm not entirely sure what look you're going for here - I know its very basic so far, so it would be unfair to say that it looks a bit blocky. To me though, it looks like a good start, you've obviously tried to get in some details in there. There are little bits that not everyone would have put in like the baton holding up the shelving. It has potential when correctly lit and textured, but maybe go easy on the clutter?

You're right, it was rough of me and for that I apologize. I didn't mean to come across that I didn't care for it, I do, it's a good start, and if that came across poorly in my initial post, it was not my intention.

Hoop

I'm an a relative newcomer and am still learning - so I appreciate ALL comments - After all the only way to learn to to accept criticism. So I thank you for all comments so far but would appreciate more comments.
Here is a photo of the coner of the room I am modelling.

I'm a relative newcomer and am still learning - so I appreciate ALL comments (After all the only way to learn is to accept criticism).

So I thank you for all comments so far but I would appreciate more comments.

Here is a another view of the room I am modelling.

I'll try again.........

A 'photo' of the room I am modelling.

Looks pretty good so far - you're sticking to your photos fairly accurately anyway. At the moment - all well and good, just remember that pretty much everything in real life is slightly bevelled so you'll be eliminating all those very hard lines.