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Lexxiam

24-03-2003 06:42 AM

the hawk

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vertiis

24-03-2003 09:54 AM

hey!
i really like the grass but the bird looks a little bit flat.

v.

CheesEv

24-03-2003 10:21 AM

The setting and the detail on the hawk are great!

The only thing I would recommend is a change of lighting (If ambient light is on, turn it off). The underside of the hawk is brighter than I imagine it should be with this setup. It looks like the sun is almost directly behind the hawk, so that would be a good spot for your key light.

Keep up the good work Lexxiam!

twisteddragon

08-04-2003 04:24 PM

Seems like the wings are barely attatched and the body does seem a little to fat, especially around the neck, giving it an owl like apearence.

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