Looks like a good start on the mouth movement. They are both very stiff, though when it comes to body movement and eye movement. Animating the eyes is probably just as important as the body, with the mouth, literally, third in order of importance.
Really over-emphasize stuff key words like "monster" "kitchen" and "crazy."
Also, as this is an animation challenge, rigging quality is included in that, so you'll probably want to clean up the weighting around the joints and stuff.
Keep it up!
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