looking good for a first head, but a few things i have to say:
- what kind of style do you have in mind?? realistic or cartoon? it's easyer to give comments when knowing what kind of style the modeler have in mind.
- i think the upperlip looks a little to thin make it a bit thicker.
- the center of the lower-lip needs also to be thicker!!
- the area around his mouth needs some work!!
- how does he close his mouth with those teeth?? maybe facing them more outside the mouth!!
okay...i hope you dont take this as a personal attack, i only wants to help you improve the head!!
keep going!!
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