Wow,, great stuff. Love the particals, but have to agree with Mark on the getting darker and maybe more sprayed out at the end... How many particals,,,,? How was the render time...

My favourite shot has to be the ending,,, well thought out shot,, nice environment and render on that,,, looked very convincing.. but the lens flare killed it. Very inspiring,,, for me to get my thoughts in line and make one serious short rather than play around,,, Hehe. Good Luck
Kumar