it looks pretty cool, but i don't like that white guy flying to that platform ( i mean that guy wich appears at about the 5th second ).
it doesn't move any of his bodyparts , so it looks a little stiff. I suggest to give him some movement.
also the lightning could use some rework ( you allready mensioned that by yourself though ).
maybe make it al a bit darker. i suggest placing a big area light high up to the sky with a dark purple/blueish color to create the dark weather effect. and when there is a lightning you can create a big flashing yellow/white light wich create some cool shadows.
I also should add some spotlights pointing on the maincharacter, so your eye is focussing on that.
oh one more thing, some surfaces doesn't have the smooth function applyed on it ( the mountain and the 'spaceship' in the beginning )
Sorry for my bad explanations. im very bad explaning things in english ( even in the dutch language im not very good in explaining things )
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