Yup!
That'll do it anyday!
It looks much better. The eyes give the bug a look like what's happening is now, in the moment.
The DOF is just enough I think. Too much and you may as well just composite a background image. That amount makes the bug stand out but keeps the scene depth.
The new position of the back bug, and the electricity is much better. I would personally show a little bit of that bug, so that it looks like the electricity is more around the outside of it rather than all over. I think that would give it more of a comicy (comic-like) look.
Anyway, I think it's better!
~~CM!
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