I must agree with sandfish and also with my own little brain. The work is great and the composition is stunning.
The only reason I said to raise the upper body a bit is to make the scene more dinamic by catching him exactly when he realises what's going on and begins to freak out and jump out of the bed. His muscles begin to contract for the leap, his fingers dig deeper into the sheet so he doesn't loose grip, and then... the jump...
On the other hand, it's just a noob's oppinion so...
Good luck! :attn:
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