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NoStr0m0 · 31-08-2005, 07:05 AM

Hi!
Sorry for leaving you like that but here the clock was almost 2 A.M. and I've been up since 6 that day so I was kinda tired...

Now... I like the last three renders.... so I will refer to them as the first, second and third, ok?

The second one gives that feeling of disconfort, like there's something really wrong with this picture. I like it... if you could move the snake a bit twards the ebd of the bed so we see it better, but that's my oppinion.

The third is also nice cause it really captures his face and the situation he's in. If the wall bothers you, make the room longer, wider or whatever... so the corner is further away.

So I would chose from one of these. Nice job anyway... Good luck and hope this reaches you in time.

P.S. When I said to move his camera close to his head, I forgot to give more details. So I ment move the camera where the bed column is, and lok down on him, twards his legs. It's a radical shot but maybe it would work... Also you could try banking the camera to the left for this position so you can see the clock (I know, I know, shut up about the clock already! But hey, I gotta have a hobby...)

31-08-2005, 07:05 AM	#88
NoStr0m0 Registered Member Join Date: Jan 2005 Location: Somewhere... in 3D space Posts: 153	Hi! Sorry for leaving you like that but here the clock was almost 2 A.M. and I've been up since 6 that day so I was kinda tired... Now... I like the last three renders.... so I will refer to them as the first, second and third, ok? The second one gives that feeling of disconfort, like there's something really wrong with this picture. I like it... if you could move the snake a bit twards the ebd of the bed so we see it better, but that's my oppinion. The third is also nice cause it really captures his face and the situation he's in. If the wall bothers you, make the room longer, wider or whatever... so the corner is further away. So I would chose from one of these. Nice job anyway... Good luck and hope this reaches you in time. P.S. When I said to move his camera close to his head, I forgot to give more details. So I ment move the camera where the bed column is, and lok down on him, twards his legs. It's a radical shot but maybe it would work... Also you could try banking the camera to the left for this position so you can see the clock (I know, I know, shut up about the clock already! But hey, I gotta have a hobby...) __________________ " ...'till the world burned!"