...i hate to say...cause i really like using reflections this way...i almost did the same thing using my characters eye and the reflection of the scene in it...but i fear...for clarity sake you may have to go with the original...which is by no means a bad thing b/c you had a nice compostiotion going as it was...
...however...
...i definately like this...but i'm partial to shiny things...i think its a really cool way to show the scene tho...if you do decide to go this route...you need to move that knife into the center of the reflection in front of the mandelin...because i'm having trouble finding it as it the way it is now...and also maybe lower the mask...or use bright colors on it so that it stands out...clarity it goig to be the trick to pulling this one off i think...
...you know...i'm still gonna have to go with i think you're better off with the other one...at least this late in the game...this one's cool...but the other is a lot more sound as far as conveying what you want it to...
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