Sorry mate - stuck in hotels with crummy wireless all week so not had a chance to view this until now...
Looks good though. Two main crits I have are:
(1) Whilst the lighting is nice and moody and really sets the tone, I kinda get the feeling that its all just that little bit too dark. Found myself squinting at the monitor trying to make out the details (although that could just be my monitor settings).
(2) Too much plain black cuts in there. The fades to black fit with the scene, but I just feel they're a tad overused/too long - it kinda breaks up the flow of the piece a little.
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