Nice to see you're still working on this one - he is taking shape now. Couple of suggestions, if I may?
First off, I think he might look better if his eyes were glossy - I know you've applied a texture to give a faux-anime style glossiness to them, but I think a properly glossy eye on top of the effect you've already got might help. The second thing is the blending of the jacket and the trousers since they are both black its difficult to distinguish one from the other - I don't know the best way to sort this out - maybe try a different colour, or give the jacket a hem at the base like you have on the sleeves and collar?
I do like to see your characters though, Barking - good work!
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