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Old 06-07-2004, 08:58 PM   #16
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Looking good!
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Old 08-07-2004, 05:59 AM   #17
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Heh, you know I really hated the movie this clip came from but the animation is shaping up nicely.
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Old 08-07-2004, 01:10 PM   #18
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lol thank's
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Old 09-07-2004, 10:25 PM   #19
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ok i got most of the basic stuff done now im just gonna take my time on the mouths now tweeking them to look perfect and flush out any bad parts
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Old 09-07-2004, 11:27 PM   #20
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looks pretty good. The only real crits I have right now are that if you watch the ant that's eating the metal's eyelid, it turns sideways for a while. It needs to stay upright the whole time. And, if you watch the ants bodies while they are talking they stay completely ridgid for a while, mainly the middle and lower sections and their legs. This makes it seem less realistic. I would make a slight breathing morph and apply it to the character's with repeat on so that it repeats over and over again simulating breath. But that's just my opinion.
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Old 10-07-2004, 01:45 AM   #21
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definitely progressing well.

I like the expressions of the faces so far, although I think the eating one could use a bit more reaction to what the other is saying.

More body movement!
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Old 10-07-2004, 06:15 AM   #22
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Heh, shaping up nicely. Took 2 veiwings to catch the slingshot at the end since it isn't really pronounced enough, but like the head shake 'I know what you're going to do please don't' of the paperclip eating ant.

Nice animation of the square grass also.

Aside from the points above, there just seems a problem with the intro of the 'bossy' ant and the whatever type of grin that is (still shivering from it and not in a scary way). The transition of not paying attention to paying attention to the clip eater..well, I don't know man but that grin, smile, whatever it is is just wrong. I can see 5 different ways to change it I hate it so much but if you change it I'll hate you not only for life but afterlife, it's so disturbing it's endearing. Heh, anyways, nice job so far.
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Old 10-07-2004, 04:29 PM   #23
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lol thanks guys, ill get to work on the body animation soon.
and ill try and change that dumb looking smile too
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Old 10-07-2004, 10:22 PM   #24
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Good work, and you have good time to fine tone it. I don't know if that eating sound should sync?
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Old 27-07-2004, 03:01 PM   #25
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complete magic - your top dollar on this one puppet. Real good work, impressed I am.
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Old 27-07-2004, 08:55 PM   #26
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thanks i cant wait to see them all finished
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Old 28-07-2004, 06:56 AM   #27
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Seem to have missed a few updates here. But this is really impressive. I love it!
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Old 31-07-2004, 03:43 PM   #28
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YES! good luck puppet, its wicked

u gotsta win , u just gotsta
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Old 01-08-2004, 05:01 AM   #29
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You kept the smile from hell. Thank [pick a religious deity]. Makes me miss doing drugs.. Great job on the whole animation.
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Old 01-08-2004, 11:57 AM   #30
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thanks meanpi2 yours looks really good i like what you did with the camera
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