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greent 23-01-2004 02:44 AM

my! alien
 
hi to all here.

since this is my first post here, i think that would be nice to post some of my works.

this is my version of an alien.

do send some comments on this :-)

http://www.mindnever.org/greent/obje...w/alien001.jpg

kumar 23-01-2004 03:33 AM

Looks great,,, hi there, as for comments... repair the smoothing errors. Some places the edges look sharp. Kind of gives the impression low poly model. Model looks very nice. Love to see this textured.

DigiMatt 23-01-2004 07:25 AM

Welcome to the forum, looks like a great model.. I agree with kumar on the smoothing issues.. and it would be great to see him textured :)

bullet_evader 23-01-2004 09:24 AM

it looks great but i have some comments :)

the head looks an little bit to big!!! make it an little bit smaller
the alien is looking happy, make him mad :)
i cant see the teeth very good, but i dont see any sharp teeths in his mounth!! his mouth is also to small.
if you wach the alien movies carefully, you see that his neck is not one object, but has more tubes running out his head to his body!!
the back of his cap on his head is good, but in the middle it is to smooth!!
dont forget the slime when its done ;-)

the body is good!! i dont have any comments on that :)
sorry for al the comments!!! but i hope you will forgive me!!!
tweak some parts, and this is gonna to be an perfect alien!!

H.I.O.M 23-01-2004 11:09 AM

Great! I have always thought about making an Alien, they are really cool.....

I like that model :)

greent 23-01-2004 01:45 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by bullet_evader
it looks great but i have some comments :)

the head looks an little bit to big!!! make it an little bit smaller
the alien is looking happy, make him mad :)
i cant see the teeth very good, but i dont see any sharp teeths in his mounth!! his mouth is also to small.
if you wach the alien movies carefully, you see that his neck is not one object, but has more tubes running out his head to his body!!
the back of his cap on his head is good, but in the middle it is to smooth!!
dont forget the slime when its done ;-)

the body is good!! i dont have any comments on that :)
sorry for al the comments!!! but i hope you will forgive me!!!
tweak some parts, and this is gonna to be an perfect alien!!

thanks for the comments.

i agree that the head is little too big. as for mouth, i've always seen alien like he's laughing at something. :-)

also, i will forgive you, and the others for the encouraging and creative comments :-)

R4s1n 24-01-2004 03:35 AM

I love his enlarged head..Sort of reminds me of the movie "Aliens"

voices3d 24-01-2004 08:23 AM

hey, thats how i look when i wake up :D... great model.

Endorphin 26-01-2004 08:57 AM

WOW!....i don't know, but the head in Alien *IS* pretty big, so i wouldn't make it to small. can't wait to see it textured.


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