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Old 23-01-2004, 02:44 AM   #1
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Default my! alien

hi to all here.

since this is my first post here, i think that would be nice to post some of my works.

this is my version of an alien.

do send some comments on this :-)

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Old 23-01-2004, 03:33 AM   #2
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Looks great,,, hi there, as for comments... repair the smoothing errors. Some places the edges look sharp. Kind of gives the impression low poly model. Model looks very nice. Love to see this textured.
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Old 23-01-2004, 07:25 AM   #3
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Welcome to the forum, looks like a great model.. I agree with kumar on the smoothing issues.. and it would be great to see him textured
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Old 23-01-2004, 09:24 AM   #4
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it looks great but i have some comments

the head looks an little bit to big!!! make it an little bit smaller
the alien is looking happy, make him mad
i cant see the teeth very good, but i dont see any sharp teeths in his mounth!! his mouth is also to small.
if you wach the alien movies carefully, you see that his neck is not one object, but has more tubes running out his head to his body!!
the back of his cap on his head is good, but in the middle it is to smooth!!
dont forget the slime when its done ;-)

the body is good!! i dont have any comments on that
sorry for al the comments!!! but i hope you will forgive me!!!
tweak some parts, and this is gonna to be an perfect alien!!
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Old 23-01-2004, 11:09 AM   #5
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Great! I have always thought about making an Alien, they are really cool.....

I like that model
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Old 23-01-2004, 01:45 PM   #6
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Originally posted by bullet_evader
it looks great but i have some comments

the head looks an little bit to big!!! make it an little bit smaller
the alien is looking happy, make him mad
i cant see the teeth very good, but i dont see any sharp teeths in his mounth!! his mouth is also to small.
if you wach the alien movies carefully, you see that his neck is not one object, but has more tubes running out his head to his body!!
the back of his cap on his head is good, but in the middle it is to smooth!!
dont forget the slime when its done ;-)

the body is good!! i dont have any comments on that
sorry for al the comments!!! but i hope you will forgive me!!!
tweak some parts, and this is gonna to be an perfect alien!!
thanks for the comments.

i agree that the head is little too big. as for mouth, i've always seen alien like he's laughing at something. :-)

also, i will forgive you, and the others for the encouraging and creative comments :-)
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Old 24-01-2004, 03:35 AM   #7
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I love his enlarged head..Sort of reminds me of the movie "Aliens"
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Old 24-01-2004, 08:23 AM   #8
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hey, thats how i look when i wake up ... great model.
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Old 26-01-2004, 08:57 AM   #9
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WOW!....i don't know, but the head in Alien *IS* pretty big, so i wouldn't make it to small. can't wait to see it textured.
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