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ShadowFox 05-06-2004 07:48 AM

Cable Modem
 
http://www.shadowfox-animations.net/...e_modem01a.jpg

k iv been working on this for half of the day so around 5hours on and off. so plz tell me what you guys think :D

R4s1n 05-06-2004 05:46 PM

From what i can see it looks good but its too dark to see all of the details. maybe make the background a bit lighter..

ShadowFox 06-06-2004 02:19 AM

http://www.shadowfox-animations.net/...e_modem02b.jpg

ShadowFox 06-06-2004 04:44 AM

k here it is all finished and stuff so plz tell me what you guys think :D

http://www.shadowfox-animations.net/...able_modem.jpg

Mark 06-06-2004 07:58 AM

Not bad at all. Coule of points:

(1) You might want to take another look at the texture you've used for the actual blue casing. Whilst it looks OK from a little distance, in extreme close up, it appears to lack any sort of depth - maybe try to add a little micro bumping in there at least.

(2) In the edge of the curved face of the model, you can see a definite polygon edge. I'd be tempted to either subdivide once or twice and tweak (if the model is all polygon), or convert to subpatches if possible to smooth this out.

Apart from that though, no real crits.

Fallenswordsman 06-06-2004 08:10 AM

Pretty much agree with Mark - although I would add that it might look nicer if you created a scene out of it with the cable modem actually sitting on a surface - little HDRI and it has the potential of looking superb.

ShadowFox 06-06-2004 09:57 AM

where can i get a HDRI image?

Mark 06-06-2004 10:37 AM

Look in the Images\HDRI folder of your Lightwave Installation.

ShadowFox 06-06-2004 11:46 AM

thx mark

http://www.shadowfox-animations.net/...m_HDRI/m00.jpg
http://www.shadowfox-animations.net/...m_HDRI/m01.jpg
http://www.shadowfox-animations.net/...m_HDRI/m02.jpg
http://www.shadowfox-animations.net/..._HDRI/sm00.jpg

3Demon 06-06-2004 12:03 PM

It's all looking pretty cool. Apart from everything that's been said, nice work :)

anoe_nomus 06-06-2004 12:04 PM

that looks pretty good.
the reflection ion the modem is just a bit off. but gret job.



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neone 06-06-2004 11:05 PM

looking good :) gj

doncha_magoso 08-06-2004 01:21 AM

GRREAT!!! I use that same HDRI pic for a lot of things!!! specially when I need to reflect a lot of lights...

But you might need to use a smoother hdri, like beachprobe or something like a sky, that might enhance the look of your mesh a little bit, and also can look clean and realistic...
BTW why donīt you turn reflection down?

Well... the model looks great man, give RADIOSITY a try...

Fallenswordsman 08-06-2004 06:26 AM

Yeh, that's what I'm talkin' about! This is looking MUCH better than your previous render. Great work!


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