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LaMereHic 20-11-2005 05:52 PM

Nikita (nudity)
 
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i begun a new character, a purple haired woman, with a cartooned style
for now i got the head done
comments and criitics are welcome, as usual. thanks

LaMereHic 20-11-2005 06:05 PM

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Here is a update with wires

LaMereHic 20-11-2005 06:42 PM

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a front view with a quick render. Dont mind the begining of the clothes.
There are a lot of fixes to do too. i'll fix them as i progress.
comments are welcome

LaMereHic 20-11-2005 07:53 PM

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A back rendered view with a bit of the legs

nemac4 21-11-2005 09:01 PM

Nice manga look. Nice job on the hair. Just a few crits..The nose doesn't quite match the style. The mesh needs some cleaning and the jaw line and neck placement look off to me. The ears are too low. Good progress so far inspite of the crits.

Keep us updated. :nod:

Fallenswordsman 22-11-2005 07:21 AM

Yep - its a fair start although there are one or two things that could be touched up on - the ribcage, for example, seems a bit too prominant at the moment, but if its going to be covered up then no problemo :)

LaMereHic 22-11-2005 01:52 PM

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a new update with the body al done
Still a lot of tweaks to go...

LaMereHic 22-11-2005 02:55 PM

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the foots done and a few tweaks later

Fallenswordsman 23-11-2005 12:32 PM

Coming along nicely :)

LaMereHic 25-11-2005 02:43 PM

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thanks for your comments,
i did a few updates, hair, body and face
i' ll start the clothes soon

LaMereHic 25-11-2005 03:49 PM

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a new update a bit of clothes and a few tweaks

LaMereHic 25-11-2005 03:51 PM

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a new update and a few tweaks later

Fallenswordsman 25-11-2005 03:58 PM

You're doing well. My own crits would be that the nose, and her facial features in general seem very pointy. The eyes could be a little shinier and you may benefit by looking at her breasts again (oo-er) as they point forward too much - normal breasts point slightly outward rather than straight forward.

Its a nice model though, coming together well :)

LaMereHic 26-11-2005 03:41 PM

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Thanks for your comments guys.
i did a few tweaks more and i worked on the texture of the clothes and did also a pair of boots
i'll tweak the details of the face after that, and will do the endomorphs for expressions
i am asking myself if i make the boots white of black.. i'll decide after...

Warlock 279 28-11-2005 07:28 PM

i'd make the boots match the dress...i.e. white dress - white boots...black dress - black boots...i'm not really finding the white boots to be working with the black dress...b/c using thos colors always says a little something about the character, white - innocent...black - sexy...or whatever...so mixing them feels like mixed signals i think...looks good so far tho...


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