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Old 20-11-2005, 05:52 PM   #1
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i begun a new character, a purple haired woman, with a cartooned style
for now i got the head done
comments and criitics are welcome, as usual. thanks
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Old 20-11-2005, 06:05 PM   #2
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Here is a update with wires
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Old 20-11-2005, 06:42 PM   #3
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a front view with a quick render. Dont mind the begining of the clothes.
There are a lot of fixes to do too. i'll fix them as i progress.
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Old 20-11-2005, 07:53 PM   #4
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A back rendered view with a bit of the legs
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Old 21-11-2005, 09:01 PM   #5
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Nice manga look. Nice job on the hair. Just a few crits..The nose doesn't quite match the style. The mesh needs some cleaning and the jaw line and neck placement look off to me. The ears are too low. Good progress so far inspite of the crits.

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Old 22-11-2005, 07:21 AM   #6
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Yep - its a fair start although there are one or two things that could be touched up on - the ribcage, for example, seems a bit too prominant at the moment, but if its going to be covered up then no problemo
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Old 22-11-2005, 01:52 PM   #7
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a new update with the body al done
Still a lot of tweaks to go...
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Old 22-11-2005, 02:55 PM   #8
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the foots done and a few tweaks later
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Old 23-11-2005, 12:32 PM   #9
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Coming along nicely
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Old 25-11-2005, 02:43 PM   #10
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thanks for your comments,
i did a few updates, hair, body and face
i' ll start the clothes soon
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Old 25-11-2005, 03:49 PM   #11
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a new update a bit of clothes and a few tweaks
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Old 25-11-2005, 03:51 PM   #12
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a new update and a few tweaks later
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Old 25-11-2005, 03:58 PM   #13
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You're doing well. My own crits would be that the nose, and her facial features in general seem very pointy. The eyes could be a little shinier and you may benefit by looking at her breasts again (oo-er) as they point forward too much - normal breasts point slightly outward rather than straight forward.

Its a nice model though, coming together well
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Old 26-11-2005, 03:41 PM   #14
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Thanks for your comments guys.
i did a few tweaks more and i worked on the texture of the clothes and did also a pair of boots
i'll tweak the details of the face after that, and will do the endomorphs for expressions
i am asking myself if i make the boots white of black.. i'll decide after...
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Old 28-11-2005, 07:28 PM   #15
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i'd make the boots match the dress...i.e. white dress - white boots...black dress - black boots...i'm not really finding the white boots to be working with the black dress...b/c using thos colors always says a little something about the character, white - innocent...black - sexy...or whatever...so mixing them feels like mixed signals i think...looks good so far tho...
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