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Old 24-07-2003, 04:24 PM   #1
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hi!this is my firs post!
Please comment and critic my man body, and his face, and what kind of hair style is good.
Btw, how to texture the head and the body, but with separate texture( so i can control a different detail ), but get a smooth result in its intersection

- sorry for my bad english, fyi i'm asian.

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Old 24-07-2003, 06:51 PM   #2
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welcome to SLW frw! a really good first post too!!
your model strikes me as a bit squarish in some areas otherwise it looks very good. About the hairstyle, how about a ponytail?
the texturing part I cant really help you with, simply because I really really suck at texturing something I have to remedy.
Looking forward to seeing the progress so keep posting updates
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Old 26-07-2003, 07:41 AM   #3
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I have to agree with Digimatt - some parts look like they need to be rounded out a bit more - more gentle curves rather than harsh curves - but overall he looks good.
The back in particular looks very flat plus the dip that makes up the spinal column doesn't extend the entire length of the back - you should be able to see a couple of the verterbrae of the spine at the bottom of the neck.
The hair - well I'd go for a spikey cut but it all depends on what personality you want him to have.
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Old 27-07-2003, 05:22 AM   #4
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very nice!!! I haven't used it in ages but it strikes me as being kinda "poser" ish great work!
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