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Old 07-10-2004, 07:57 PM   #1
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Default two of my rooms

two of my rooms...with some "small" changes

Render took 3 days with fprime
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Old 07-10-2004, 08:30 PM   #2
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Excellent work! I've been working on a "similar" scene and can only hope to make it look this nice.

Only crit I've got is the wood grain on the desk doesn't look quite right to me. Other than that, looks wonderufl.

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Old 07-10-2004, 11:34 PM   #3
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Looks good... but 3 days with fPrime seems a bit long. I would think you could get that kind of image out of less than an hour. What are your box specs?

I think I'm going to have to take a swing at a room...
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Old 08-10-2004, 07:27 PM   #4
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thx for the reply...i have an AMD XP 1700+ 512 DDR 333 GF3 Ti200
but i think there is smth wrong with my windows....cuz its soooo sloww...and i'm soo lazy to reinstall

Any particular things that seem wrong...or bad rendered to you ? i wish to emprove.
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Old 08-10-2004, 07:59 PM   #5
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some dudes on some forum werent happy with my render...so i did another one...hope its better
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Old 08-10-2004, 08:23 PM   #6
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looks really nice, only thing that bothers me are the monitors. Don't know why exactly.
their is also an strange shadow at the far left from the table ( on the ground ).

light from the windows is very well done!!
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Old 09-10-2004, 12:24 AM   #7
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Nice one. Three days seems way too excessive though given the specs of your box. I'm assuming you've used radiosity in there for the image. You might want to look at reducing the rays per evaluation somewhat to see if that will produce an acceptable render in a shorter time.

Also, there is the shadow to the left of the desk as Bullet_evader has already pointed out. Other points are: 1. The monitor on the left still looks out of place. It actually looks as though its absorbing light rather like a black hole The one on the right looks fine. 2. I'd take another look at the desk texture. Either shrink the scale of the texture, or even add some blurring/texture aa to it to prevent the obvious atifacts that are showing.
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Old 11-10-2004, 12:28 PM   #8
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Yeah! I like this one...looks realistic to me...I really like the lighting and the look of the blinds.
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Old 12-10-2004, 07:43 PM   #9
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allright....last render...fixed some stuff ppl pointed out...its done. No more changes
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Old 14-10-2004, 05:25 AM   #10
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LOL, you don't need any more changes! Good Job!
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Old 23-10-2004, 10:52 AM   #11
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When are you going to rent it out? Just kidding, a super job morghen.
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Old 23-10-2004, 12:22 PM   #12
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Nice livingroom.. But the walls are alittle boring.. Maybe some Pictures? and the monitor on the right looks very odd the color is very flat looking.
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