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Old 20-11-2004, 06:07 PM   #1
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Default Slug like creature

Something for a 10 second animation competition - Very basic but limited to just over 1Mb for animation plus audio track.
C & C on this character please.
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Old 21-11-2004, 01:19 AM   #2
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Hard to crit something on that small a scale. From what I can see, it looks OK so far...
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Old 21-11-2004, 01:38 AM   #3
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Thanks Mark. To everybody else, here is a larger picture - let me know what you think - even if you think it is rubbish - let me know - I need criticism - Cheers.
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Old 21-11-2004, 05:03 AM   #4
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Seems ok so far...fingers are a bit thick though...
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Old 23-11-2004, 04:26 PM   #5
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looks okay but i think you should change that bumpmap. maybe try to create your own!?!
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Old 24-11-2004, 09:51 PM   #6
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I think it looks good, i think that the texturing on the face looks alittle off.
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Old 25-11-2004, 08:17 PM   #7
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that bump map doesn't suit that creature... More of a warty or wet look would be good for it. Other than that, um... looks okay!
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