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Old 05-03-2003, 04:25 AM   #1
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Talking This is my first work!How it looks?

Tel me what you think about my work?
What should i repair or what to do to get more realistic model?
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Old 05-03-2003, 04:27 AM   #2
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I forgot, corvette is from some scene i found on net.
I made this picture for compare did i made it right.
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Old 05-03-2003, 06:44 AM   #3
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This is your first work? simply amazing the left car looks a little odd on the middle of the hood though, is it supposed to look like that? with the sharpe edge running over the hood..
Use a HDRI image for to get more realistic reflections and it will look even better. Could you post wireframe and maybe a closeup?

great work mate!
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Old 05-03-2003, 02:43 PM   #4
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Yes, the hood seems odd. The holes for the headlights seem too simple and I can't see a seem for the door - are there doors? It doesn't look like you can do a Dukes of Hazzard. The only way in looks like it's from above.
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Old 05-03-2003, 02:46 PM   #5
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Speaking of seams, it doesn't look like there are any. That's all well and good but I still think you would want to lift the hood from time to time.
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Old 05-03-2003, 10:55 PM   #6
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Yeah i still have some work to do on this car, to fix some details.
The hood is litlle odd and that how i wanted to looks like.
DigiMatt thanks for your words. I will try to use HDRI image. Tell me where i can find some tutorial about HDRI.
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Old 06-03-2003, 07:08 AM   #7
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Theres a pretty good tutorial about HDRI on Newtek's site which you could check out.
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Old 07-03-2003, 12:19 AM   #8
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Thanks. If you have somthing alse what you tahink i need to fix tell me.
When i finish with HDRI i will send another picture





What you say about this color?
Or any sugestions about color?
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Old 21-03-2003, 05:42 AM   #9
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Well for a first timer I think I should quit before I try to get ahead! great work man, I might try a procedural or two for the surfacing...mabe split the car surface into 1) 50% procedural make sure it's tiny in size (save the setting) 2)20 % gradient colour with alpha channel 3) some colour30%

maybe copy the procedural from step (1) to the specular to give it a little uneven shine...but then again I'm weird and like my cars to look like they have a metallic painty feel to them.
no matter though it's an awesome first attempt
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Old 21-03-2003, 10:43 PM   #10
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thanks quaoar, i'll try that soon.
I haven't got a time so i didn't work nothing on it.
I hope that soon will be some update
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Old 08-04-2003, 02:31 PM   #11
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After i found some mistakes on my model i've decided to start it over.
It looks like this now
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Old 08-04-2003, 02:32 PM   #12
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here is another one
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Old 11-04-2003, 04:29 AM   #13
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can we see a wireframe...

are you making it out of sub patches
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Old 12-04-2003, 08:30 PM   #14
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Actually, i made this one using old one as a backdrop. There was some missing details and i didn't know how to fix that so i start it over. i'll make wireframe soon i was kind of busy this days so i didn't working much in LW.
do you see any mistakes or any help on texturing.

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Old 25-04-2003, 07:43 PM   #15
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I made some new pictures.
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