21-10-2003, 02:34 PM
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I need your opinons
coments please...
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21-10-2003, 03:17 PM
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HI iv
Looks fine - but - you could make a big difference if you were to have lights coming under some of the doors - and - the windows above the doors......
PS Like the "Third Man" camera angle.... |
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21-10-2003, 10:58 PM
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I liked very much.
- The Glass door call my atension big time. - top and bottom are great and looks real. - Walls and doors for some reason looks cartoonish, Maybe because the doors frame are too glossy and round. - I'd try something like Keef mentioned and if possible a cross hallway after the second door or so. You did a really good job there.
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22-10-2003, 02:41 AM
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dude add some door knobs, it looks as if a person has to knock down the door before gettin into each room, other than that it looks awesome
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24-10-2003, 05:23 PM
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Don't give up on this one....
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28-10-2003, 06:04 PM
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I like the Exit Door and sign, the other doors could have some brass room numbers on them and have you tried a bit of DOF (Depth of Field), other than that I like it, good work
Dae
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29-10-2003, 12:56 PM
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hey
i think it's a really good start. as some other users already said you could add light below the doors... besides that i think the textures are way to clean. you could add some dirt (a small at least) to some wall areas to make it more believable. maybe some scratches? same thing on the floor. too generic. v
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12-11-2003, 09:30 PM
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Re: I need your opinons
Looks very good. A little too clean. The door frames seem to extend underneath the doors which seems a bit odd.
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13-11-2003, 04:08 AM
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Looks good
Looking good so far! I Like the camera tilt. Maybe if we knew what your planning to do we could help guide you a bit more..nice subtle texture on that green door.
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