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Old 18-01-2004, 01:34 PM   #1
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Here is an render of my latest work!!! i still wanna improve it, but i don't know how!!! can you tell me??
thanks a lot!!

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Old 18-01-2004, 05:03 PM   #2
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Hahaha! That character is GREAT! I would suggest, though, making the hands and feet a bit more real by adding knuckles. Right now, they look a bit flat, like gloves.
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Old 18-01-2004, 09:29 PM   #3
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Yep. I'd agree with that. Also, take another look at the wrist. He seems to have no bones in him there since it's forming a clean curve all the way through from the hand to the elbow.
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Old 18-01-2004, 10:46 PM   #4
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Looks like something from futurama.
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Old 19-01-2004, 06:11 PM   #5
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yo guys...thanks for the replys...i go fix the hands as soon as possible!!! any other comments are welcome!!!
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Old 19-01-2004, 08:23 PM   #6
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One more comment... The way the bottom of his body is shaped, it kind of looks like he should have a tail of some sort, or maybe his body should continue backward (behind his legs)... Could you post a shot from the side or back?
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Old 19-01-2004, 08:38 PM   #7
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here is an quick render from behind!!! as you can see, the body is continuing backwards ( jsut what you said )!!!
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Old 19-01-2004, 11:33 PM   #8
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First I appologize for the next picture (I CAN'T DRAW!!!). Anyway, what I was trying to suggest is that your alien reminds me somewhat of a grasshopper... the image below is a side view of the basic shape I imagined.
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Old 20-01-2004, 03:14 PM   #9
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Ah cool looking guy...great
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Old 20-01-2004, 03:46 PM   #10
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cooooooool buddy! maybe to add some sort of a pointy crest? either pointy or fuzzy like gremlins..... :-)
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Old 20-01-2004, 05:17 PM   #11
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i think i have seen that in a dream i think, no, but realy, its way cool., reminds me of the old ghostbusters it look hilarius.
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Old 20-01-2004, 05:25 PM   #12
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its cool when profs are liking my work!!!

thank you all for the comments!! i still hadn't much time to work on the hands, but when i have time. i will change it!!
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Old 20-01-2004, 05:25 PM   #13
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I would say, he looks very nice,, Very animatable too. Just give him better hands and feet. The rest are fine, cute work
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Old 20-01-2004, 08:27 PM   #14
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well because i had time, i have created other hands, only one problem!! THE HANDS LOOKS TO REALISTIC
i also have added 3 euh....things on his head!!! well just see for yourself in the render!!
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Old 20-01-2004, 11:38 PM   #15
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Yeah! Those "things" on his head TOTALLY work! Have any more characters for him to interact with?
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