23-03-2005, 10:16 PM
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Help with car
I am a sophomore in highschool and just bought Lightwave about a month ago. This is my first serious piece. Any info would be sweet.
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24-03-2005, 05:53 AM
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Unfortunately i can't say much because the image is too dark and most of the car is in the shadows.
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24-03-2005, 07:22 PM
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Here is a brighter render. I really need some tips though. Anything will help
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25-03-2005, 04:05 PM
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Hey dude
Hey dude check your email I am sending you a aemail with soem tps because I already had it typed out lol.
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25-03-2005, 04:20 PM
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Looks good can you post a wireframe also
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25-03-2005, 07:50 PM
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Here is the wire frame. Probably not the best flow, obviously, but this is my first project so I am at least proud of it.
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26-03-2005, 03:34 PM
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Hey
hey7 I cant send you a email lol sorry bout that but here um I think that the car looks to organic I mean its to smooth. Cars usually have harder edges if its a custom car then its cool but thats how it seems to me.
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26-03-2005, 03:39 PM
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Alright I will keep that in mind. Thanks a ton
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04-04-2005, 04:48 PM
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That looks fairly good to me, are you at college, uni?
It is a bit smooth, but thing is it works as a cartoon vehicle, if it was realism you were going for your not that far off it, just a few tweeks in the mesh harder edges etc would do it. Great job man keep us posted. Try box modelling the basic shape and go from there, but if you want a challenge, try using NURB modelling theres a tutorial on this site. |
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18-04-2005, 10:02 PM
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Alright I might give that a try. I am in highschool right now, only a sophomore, to answer your question. Thanks a ton for the tips guys.
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