18-09-2004, 04:17 PM
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where' the DOF, you are going to need it to focus peoples attention on whats happening with the characters, at the moment my eyes get drawn up to the volcanos.
if you cant apply DOF in lightwave, because of your machine, you can do it in PS, it would greatly enhance the final scene. dae 
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19-09-2004, 08:26 AM
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Dae your right, so here is a shot with a nice DOF. Tell me what you think. thx
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19-09-2004, 12:51 PM
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almost there
I would up the dof and also try blur the foreground, If it is not to much trouble, change the sky to a blue-greyish colour to see if the mountains gel better with the backdrop.
Dae keep it up
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19-09-2004, 05:41 PM
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I really like this one. Good job OZ!!! Yea, u could probably try changing the sky in Photoshop instead of rendering the whole thing out again!!
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20-09-2004, 01:53 AM
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The sky was discussed during the intial construction of the environment and i really wanted to give a gassy feel to the atmosphere. ifeel the green sky really enhances that feel. So to stay true to my original idea i am going to leave it as it is, but i will look at it in photoshop for some possible highlights. thx for oyur input.
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20-09-2004, 03:06 PM
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here is final render v4. I really like this one! tell me what you think. thx
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21-09-2004, 07:26 PM
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LOL @ v4. i know exactly how you feel there mate, looks really good.
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