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Old 04-03-2004, 08:41 PM   #1
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This is my first scene created in Lightwave - the surface of Mars. I have had some experience modelling in Maya 5 and Cinema 4D previous to this.

Any constructive criticism would be appreciated!

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I forgot to mention. I know the lines of rocks look a little too perfect. I will correct them to make them look a lot more random.
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Old 05-03-2004, 01:25 AM   #2
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Just the other day I went to my doctor and I was reading a magazine and I was looking this picture of Mars.
Comparing to yours, I see very little difference, but the sky is much orange (Well I'm color blind any ways).
About your picture I didn't like much the rocks been so simetric positioned but the overal, I like it very much.
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Old 05-03-2004, 05:43 AM   #3
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Yes, the position of the rocks needs adjusted. You can see some parts of the image where several rocks form obvious lines.

Aside from that, great image.
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Old 05-03-2004, 07:33 PM   #4
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haha ! i know that tute ! great result voices3d has done something similar
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Old 05-03-2004, 07:56 PM   #5
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i like this.

one comment on the background, it looks unfinished compared to the ground. its hard to get an atmosphere like that of mars, but take a look at the following:-
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Old 09-03-2004, 10:53 AM   #6
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You should use procedual textures instead of that pretty ugly imagemap on the ground, I think it would look better...nice work though

this is a planet made by voices3d Mars
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