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Old 20-09-2004, 08:53 PM   #1
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Any crits please.
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Old 21-09-2004, 07:36 AM   #2
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I like it. Can't really crit as I'm not sure what the original looks like, but nice model nevertheless. I would perhaps put it on a surface that is more in the same tone as the phone itself.
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Old 21-09-2004, 07:44 AM   #3
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Thanks for the comments Fallenswordsman, I agree but
I still working on a descent background.
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Old 21-09-2004, 07:46 AM   #4
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Looks good. I'd suggest you take another look at the dialler on the phone however. It seems to cast no shadow whatsoever upon the main body of the phone. I'd expect to see a slight shadowing - if not off to the side, then at least to the underside since those old rotary diallers were usually set slightly above the main surface of the phone base...
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Old 21-09-2004, 08:14 AM   #5
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Thankyou Mark I,m checking the scene for that now.
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