[Sharp]

well sorry about that i was watching the football.

well my legs need alot of work but there a start so here they are

[Zeeman]

try fixing the thighs, they look a little poofy somehow

[Sharp]

yea i know im trying to get the whole body done first before i altar things

and i did them while watching the football lol, there also to small im going to try fix a few things today , the legs and the chest and do the arms the hopefully i can start on body details

[Sharp]

i think i have sorted out the body and legs for now anyway

i really cannot hands which are in this pic atm so im going to delete them and iv ordered a lw book which is surposed to be very good for organic models so ill wait until that arrives and try then

but heres a quick render mostly to try out some basic surfaces

[Sharp]

although i dont really like the arms im going to have to stop on them for the time being or ill not get finished

but i have come into a strange problem im getting the kind of star effect where i havent got the star problem on this post ill attach the problem shown and next post ill how my wireframe.

[Sharp]

heres the arms wireframe

[Sharp]

never mind i found it , it was my bump lol

[Sharp]

heres a front view with a surface texture for its skin.

please critisize it as im new to the surface editor it taken me while but i think i have got the lights in the correct places and the colours of the body.

if you can crit the model to it would be helpful.

tomorrow i will try get the head armor done the feet and the tail. ill have about 4-5 hours so i hope i can get them done

ill attack the skin surface ( if i can hopefully ) if you want to have a look

nope it wornt attach is there any way i can attach this?
owell if you want it message me and ill send you.

iv never actually used lightwave scene editor other then render the picture lol so it isnt very good at all but its my first time at it and it took me almost all day so im happy

[Sharp]

oops i forgot about the render and just tryed to add the surface, here it is.

[mtmckinley]

Well, at the moment, I'd say the modeling needs some work. There doesn't appear to be much of any real antatomical form to this guy yet. I'd recomend taking a look at anatomy reference and try tweaking it some.

Keep it up!

[Fallenswordsman]

Too dark! (either that or my monitor needs fiddling around with) I think he needs a bit more of a shaped neck at the moment - I think that's what's really letting him down the most.

[Sharp]

yea sorry about the darkness, i was on a lcd monitor on a normal one npw and i see its darkness ill tweak it both modeling and the darkness later.

[kumar]

Hmm,, think mikes right about the anatonomy reference. I would be tempted to get comic superhero or villian reference. The proportions are different and very interesting.

[Zeeman]

right at the neck, try to put in the collar bone thingy. Like in ur concept. With the armour it'll look wicked.

[Sharp]

thanks for info.

didnt get to do anything yestoday went out with my family for farthers day.

ill try tweaking the neck mostly. and other parts today. i plan on doing that, his tail, and his helmet.

if i can get that done today i should be on target to complete