12-08-2004, 10:44 AM
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its a very cute dinosaur so far
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13-08-2004, 10:30 AM
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The first of four renders. You might see that the eyes are not finished. I need to add more detail around them.
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13-08-2004, 10:31 AM
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the second one.
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13-08-2004, 10:33 AM
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the third one. This render and the next are made with a morph to simulate the dino opening his mouth. As you can also notice that there is no tongue yet. I don't think i will change the teeth because i can't find very good ref on teeth.
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13-08-2004, 10:34 AM
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last one. Please criticize the model so i can modify and make it better.
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13-08-2004, 10:48 AM
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mmh since its a cartoony guy its hard to give some critics!!
first i think the teeth are looking wrong...maybe make them more sharp!! now they just look like stretched discs!!! maybe add some more detail to the dino!! ( maybe some wrinkles around the eye or something )!! hehe this may be strange to hear...but it reminds me of the chestburster from the alienmovies hehe!!! well hope i gave you some help!!! keep going!! its a very simply but funny dinosaur!! just give it a little bit more detail!!! |
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13-08-2004, 10:58 AM
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And I asked for critisizm and i thank you for your point of view on what i should change. Oh and BTW thanx for posting that link on your thread for the dino ref. Would you by any chance know of a place where they have teeth ref?
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13-08-2004, 11:51 AM
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sorry... didn't read that part!!
you asked for some teeth references.... he had medium sized and not to sharp teeths!! did a quick search at google and found this one!! http://www.healthstones.com/dinosaur...chiosaurus.jpg |
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13-08-2004, 12:09 PM
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Thanx, i'll try to update it sometime today.
I wonder why i didn't find anything on google....
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17-08-2004, 10:09 PM
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This is great.... very neat style!
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18-08-2004, 01:37 AM
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Mate its coming along well, the fun thing about cartoon style models is they can have unatural poses and expressions for an animal. Here is a big word for ya.
Anthropomorphism. The act of attributing human forms or qualities to entities which are not human. This is used in animations all the time and i would start modeling in some human expressions into the face to give the model a personality. Smile, cheeky grins, sly, confused, anything. Hope this helps. OzWOlf |
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18-08-2004, 02:49 AM
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Thanx guys! I haven't touched the dino for quite a while due to work and me going back to my 350Z. I have off tomorrow so i'll try to update as much as possible.
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