[Mark]

Originally posted by Leovenous Mark ... you SURELY have something more to say!

Hmm... right... now, where can I possbily begin to let that cruel and sadistic streak I have buried deep within me come out????

/me grins evilly at JD

[Turbo-Dan]

you did a crazy good job on the shell. can't wait for a render

[Leovenous]

Sorry, no render yet. Including this. I am still working on panel edges and I put in part of the headlights.

And I keep asking myself; "WWPD" What would Philip do?

[voices3d]

looking good

[Leovenous]

Started on the tires. Still working on cleaning up panels and butting them up properly. Added a cap panel and lens to the headlights. Getting kinda layer heavy now.

[Mark]

Looking real good there so far JD. Can't fault it...

[morghen]

i admire the detail....but you have some errors....the lines are not correct in some parts...if you wont correct them i'll post again

[ponder_it]

I just downloaded the tutorial. Where you find the templates for the car? ie: back, top and side viewports. And what are the starting dimentions of the car.

Cheerz.

[Mark]

You can find the templates in the free part of the tutorial here:

http://www.simplylightwave.com/movie...tml?tut_id=503

[Leovenous]

Originally posted by morghen i admire the detail....but you have some errors....the lines are not correct in some parts...if you wont correct them i'll post again

I know there are some obvious things I have not fixed yet, but out of couriosity, what lines are you talking about?

And whats whith the threat?

I was thinking yesterday about what it might take to build a mimic McLaren (in real life). Get an older Crown Vic with a good V8 or something, reverse the tranny, adjust some chassis, make a fiberglass body....

McLaren F(Fake)1

[ckyuk]

Originally posted by Leovenous I was thinking yesterday about what it might take to build a mimic McLaren (in real life). Get an older Crown Vic with a good V8 or something, reverse the tranny, adjust some chassis, make a fiberglass body.... McLaren F(Fake)1

Considered doing it myself a few months back but ended up deciding to build my own prototype race car.

[morghen]

i'm sorry my english is not quite what i think it is i didn't mean to be rude....i just wanted to say that i do not want to spoil your thread with modified pictures and if you won't see the things that i consider to be errors i'll post and image like this one here


now....

1. i had the same problem...the line must be convexed not concaved(i dont know if in english you say so to the shapes that can hold whater or the ones thad cant)

2.there seems to be some problem with the points there

3.the front bumper is not that bumped

4.too sharp

5.too sharp again and the weels don't come out that mutch


sorry again to be rude and to mess your thread

[Leovenous]

Thats great morghen... I have been waiting for you to do that. Your crits arent rude, theyre fine. Just that one sentence about "if I dont fix it" sounded odd.

I have a question about the rear wheel. I was under the impression that it was supposed to come out as far as the buldge in the side-body. So either I am wrong, or my buldge is too big. Also, if I bring the back wheels in toward 0 at all, they will be narrower than the front. Thats not right, is it? Maybe I need to widen the whole rear end a tad.

I knew about some of the other problems, like my pregnant bumper, but the concave shape is helpful.

Feel free to crit like that all you want.

Here is the render. I got the road surface from the downloads section:

[morghen]

more light pls here is a photo in my back yard

[Leovenous]

I did the low light on purpose. I don't want to show details and I don't want crits It was just for fun and experiment. Crits on the wireframes are just fine.