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Old 13-08-2004, 11:19 PM   #1
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Talking Harley Davidson - Evolution V2 ( 1st Bike )

Hi, here is my final clay render, what u guys think :p

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Old 14-08-2004, 12:59 AM   #2
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A really nice looking piece there Davie. Now the trick is to go for the full photo real effect...


There does, however appear to be an artifact on the headlight. As if theres been a bulge left in there around the centre. Apart from that, can't see too much up with it. (although I still think the taillight is a little too pronounced )
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Old 14-08-2004, 11:14 AM   #3
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very nice model good job
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Old 14-08-2004, 01:27 PM   #4
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cheers for the comments guys, ive just started on a new drawing so im taking a break from 3D, ill get back to texturing this in a week or so,

dont worry ill fix that front light, and yeah, ill move that tail light in a bit.

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Old 17-08-2004, 12:34 PM   #5
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wow, your HD turned out really swell.. cant wait to see it textured. awesome job!
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Old 17-08-2004, 07:28 PM   #6
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here is a texture image :p

what u think

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Old 17-08-2004, 09:51 PM   #7
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That is looking really sweet. I'd take a look at the shadow casting though since you appear to have shadows coming from two different sources - looking slightly unrealistic.
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Old 17-08-2004, 10:30 PM   #8
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Good job. When you get your final render done I can forward it to some people at Harley to see what they think if you like?
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Old 18-08-2004, 10:31 AM   #9
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that would be cool, could u send me the contact number or address, id like to see what they say aswell

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Old 24-08-2004, 11:03 PM   #10
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gud job dude! but the shininess of the bike is a bit distracting somehow. too much HRDI me thinks.
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Old 30-08-2004, 09:40 PM   #11
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hey! I agree what Mark says... To have a realistic scene like you want to have ..you need to fake the sun with light(s)... ever seen two suns? (the word suns doesn't even exicts :p) You probably want every angle well lit so....the way I would adjust your scene is get rid of your 2nd light and replace it for some lights at 0.1 volume... ...just make sure you won't get 2 shadows...(you might wanne play with the main shadow aswell )

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Old 04-09-2004, 08:03 PM   #12
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