[LaMereHic]

I have been working on a few new cartoon models
this WE
i post some Picts
they are not textured well
but i apreciate critics on them

[LaMereHic]

i ll post one by one.. :p

[LaMereHic]

and the last at list

[ghDude]

the shark looks pretty good, but the top gums look kinda funny.
the eagle looks the best, but if you are going to animate it, i'd make the arms a little longer, don't know about the flat top head.

the penguin? it's a sad creature I think the toes need a little rounding.

[LaMereHic]

thanks for you advices
i dont know what a gums is
sorry i am french and i dont understand slang
for now on the eagle isn't gonna be animate yet, if i do, i'll have to create it with the spread wings
for the head it comes from my drawing..
dunno if i have change it because for my part it does not anoy me....
for the penguin i'll have to rework it i think.. but yes it is a sad creature

[Mark]

Gums are the jaw tissue that hold your teeth in place.

In french I think the word is 'gencive' (but I could be wrong).

[LaMereHic]

no mark you are right this is called gencives in french