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djamu · 06-07-2004, 06:12 PM

I've posted this allready on another forum, might as well share it here
have it also in 1536x2048, guess that's to big to post

Fallenswordsman · 07-07-2004, 04:32 AM

Djamu - looks really nice! How did you do the eyelashes and the eyebrows? Couple of wee crits - the nostrils seem a bit sharp to me and the eyes look a bit loose in their sockets (this might be just the darkness around the eyes that makes me think this, but it just looks like the eyelids aren't quite running flush to the eyeballs) other than that, its a great looking model.

sspikedudley · 07-07-2004, 08:33 AM

yeah the bottom of the nose seems a bit flat should be more rounded downwards and looks a bit to pointed texturing is good but there seems to be a bit of scretch on the freckles

HAZCHEM · 07-07-2004, 11:29 AM

I think it looks great man keep up the good work.

voices3d · 07-07-2004, 11:44 AM

nice texturing

. But i agree with sspikedudley. Little flat, trye to get that little thing right over the lip allitle more out or something

djamu · 07-07-2004, 12:28 PM

thx for the replies

Fallenswordsman > the eyebrows & eyelashes is just flat single ( each eyebrow/eyelash) transparancy mapped poly,
with a look of 1day old cracking mascara ( examine ur GF eyes if she wears mascara more than a day old

)

even the hair are polys ( no sasquatch )

regarding the freckles it's true they look a little stretched on the cheeks, but the girl I got this freckles from ( & yes I did take these pictures ) has freckles like this & I didn't want to correct them ( make them round ), think it's caused by acne or something

regarding the nose you're absolutely right ( it was a real stuggle to get it somehow decent, - remind this is my first organic model, until now I only did machines & stuff-

regarding the eyes, I know there are to big & to widely spaced, but I did do that on purpose, wanted to give the model a kind of manga look ( and I like it that way )

djamu · 07-07-2004, 12:37 PM

here's another shot

djamu · 07-07-2004, 12:38 PM

and another

dae · 07-07-2004, 06:55 PM

not to sure if the manga look works.

Dae

ShadowFox · 07-07-2004, 09:14 PM

boooooooooooooobs!!!!!!!!:p

Fallenswordsman · 08-07-2004, 05:11 AM

Generally, looks good. I like the mole you have under her right breast. The skin texture looks a bit pasty and off for her body but I can't really think of what else to suggest, it doesn't quite look healthy and glowing as you'd expect skin to (although I couldn't do any better myself)
There is a teeny error in the way the pectorals meet the deltoids from what I can see, but otherwise, its a great job.

Oh, and thanks for the information regarding the eyebrows! Looks really effective!

07-07-2004, 11:29 AM	#4
HAZCHEM Registered Member Join Date: Jan 2004 Location: Brisbane Australia Posts: 100	I think it looks great man keep up the good work. __________________

07-07-2004, 11:44 AM	#5
voices3d Registered Member Join Date: Sep 2003 Location: Sweden Posts: 598	nice texturing . But i agree with sspikedudley. Little flat, trye to get that little thing right over the lip allitle more out or something __________________ ...Earth is a model and life is a render...

07-07-2004, 06:55 PM	#9
dae Full Access Member Join Date: Apr 2003 Location: Hampshire, UK Posts: 362	not to sure if the manga look works. Dae __________________ "I THINK, THEREFORE I AM" René*„escartes

07-07-2004, 09:14 PM	#10
ShadowFox Full Access Member Join Date: May 2004 Location: USA, Texas Posts: 110	boooooooooooooobs!!!!!!!!:p __________________

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07-07-2004, 04:32 AM	#2
Fallenswordsman Moderator Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 1,702	Djamu - looks really nice! How did you do the eyelashes and the eyebrows? Couple of wee crits - the nostrils seem a bit sharp to me and the eyes look a bit loose in their sockets (this might be just the darkness around the eyes that makes me think this, but it just looks like the eyelids aren't quite running flush to the eyeballs) other than that, its a great looking model.

07-07-2004, 08:33 AM	#3
sspikedudley Full Access Member Join Date: Feb 2004 Location: Nottingham, England Posts: 313	yeah the bottom of the nose seems a bit flat should be more rounded downwards and looks a bit to pointed texturing is good but there seems to be a bit of scretch on the freckles

07-07-2004, 12:28 PM	#6
djamu Registered Member Join Date: Jul 2004 Location: Belgium Posts: 6	thx for the replies Fallenswordsman > the eyebrows & eyelashes is just flat single ( each eyebrow/eyelash) transparancy mapped poly, with a look of 1day old cracking mascara ( examine ur GF eyes if she wears mascara more than a day old ) even the hair are polys ( no sasquatch ) regarding the freckles it's true they look a little stretched on the cheeks, but the girl I got this freckles from ( & yes I did take these pictures ) has freckles like this & I didn't want to correct them ( make them round ), think it's caused by acne or something regarding the nose you're absolutely right ( it was a real stuggle to get it somehow decent, - remind this is my first organic model, until now I only did machines & stuff- regarding the eyes, I know there are to big & to widely spaced, but I did do that on purpose, wanted to give the model a kind of manga look ( and I like it that way )

08-07-2004, 05:11 AM	#11
Fallenswordsman Moderator Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 1,702	Generally, looks good. I like the mole you have under her right breast. The skin texture looks a bit pasty and off for her body but I can't really think of what else to suggest, it doesn't quite look healthy and glowing as you'd expect skin to (although I couldn't do any better myself) There is a teeny error in the way the pectorals meet the deltoids from what I can see, but otherwise, its a great job. Oh, and thanks for the information regarding the eyebrows! Looks really effective!