04-03-2004, 08:41 PM
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My First Lightwave Scene
This is my first scene created in Lightwave - the surface of Mars. I have had some experience modelling in Maya 5 and Cinema 4D previous to this.
Any constructive criticism would be appreciated! *EDIT* I forgot to mention. I know the lines of rocks look a little too perfect. I will correct them to make them look a lot more random.
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05-03-2004, 01:25 AM
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Just the other day I went to my doctor and I was reading a magazine and I was looking this picture of Mars.
Comparing to yours, I see very little difference, but the sky is much orange (Well I'm color blind any ways). About your picture I didn't like much the rocks been so simetric positioned but the overal, I like it very much.
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05-03-2004, 05:43 AM
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Yes, the position of the rocks needs adjusted. You can see some parts of the image where several rocks form obvious lines.
Aside from that, great image. 
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05-03-2004, 07:33 PM
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haha ! i know that tute !
great result voices3d has done something similar
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05-03-2004, 07:56 PM
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i like this.
one comment on the background, it looks unfinished compared to the ground. its hard to get an atmosphere like that of mars, but take a look at the following:- |
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09-03-2004, 10:53 AM
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You should use procedual textures instead of that pretty ugly imagemap on the ground, I think it would look better...nice work though
this is a planet made by voices3d Mars
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