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Old 01-08-2005, 04:07 PM   #1
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Here's a pretty big render of a violin I made.
Rendered at a 486 x 1406
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Old 02-08-2005, 07:55 AM   #2
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My c&c - if you wanna hear it
1. Composition is weak, so I would suggest to change the angels of render (look at Philip's Stratocaster render and you'll see what I mean )
2. Change background colour (some cold colour would do) so that the violin can pop up more from the background.
3. Reflections are a bit harsh...

Other than that it's looking good!


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Old 02-08-2005, 08:40 PM   #3
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Yeah i thought about altering the angle of the camera, just didn't get around to it.

I don't want a cold color.

Yeah, once I looked at my violin i realized it wasn't so shiny.
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Old 03-08-2005, 07:17 AM   #4
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I'd agree with the points Bopuc made, but still, its a nice model though.
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