01-01-2008, 08:03 PM
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Viper GTS
1996 Viper GTS
I'll try to improve the render and give some better results. 
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02-01-2008, 03:52 AM
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Looking good so far.
Couple of crits that stand out immediately to me that you might want to look at. (1) The geometry of the front wheel arch looks a little pinched towards the front indicator: (see the image attached) (2) There's something looks a little odd about the door line where it meets the front wing (not sure if the curvature of the wing should run into the door a little more)... |
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16-01-2008, 04:42 AM
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Great piece of modelling although I think I agree with Mark on the crit - he has a lot sharper eyes for these sorts of things than I have and I would never have spotted the pinching unless he pointed it out. Nice to see you modelled the interiors too.
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