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Old 20-01-2003, 11:15 AM   #1
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Here's a bottle of Gin. Please feel free to crit.
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Old 20-01-2003, 11:26 AM   #2
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nice work doo.

One thing: As the bottle is Full It should have the little bit under the lid.. (you know the bit? the bit that threads when opening)

Other then that it looks great doo, Interesting lighting you got going there as well.. it really gives that "lemon lime" feel.

Nice render!
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Old 20-01-2003, 11:42 AM   #3
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Very nice Doo,
I agree with kevin about the cap thing.. but its just nitpicking.
Ive never seen lemon lime gin.. is it actually existing?

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Old 20-01-2003, 11:44 AM   #4
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Originally posted by DigiMatt
Very nice Doo,
I agree with kevin about the cap thing.. but its just nitpicking.
Ive never seen lemon lime gin.. is it actually existing?

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Yep... you know what .. I feel bad saying ANYTHING about such nice work but I guess all the crits help.
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Old 20-01-2003, 11:53 AM   #5
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Kevin: so true, crits are great in whatever form they are.. my work usually sucks before I get crits, and after.. hmm it still usually sucks, but some actually comes out quite okay..
Im all for crits!!!
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Old 20-01-2003, 11:56 AM   #6
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good work doo. I like the lighting as well.
How about adding a subtle bump map to the glass material?
(or, if you already did; make it a wee bit less subtle :p )
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Old 20-01-2003, 04:06 PM   #7
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Thank you all! I also agree to the cap thing... but I chosed not to make it Maybe I will do it later.
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