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Skelegon_Key · 07-02-2003, 08:29 PM

Hi Guys

This is my second attempt at a female character model ( my first is locked away someplace no one will ever find it , it so bad !!! )

No textures yet, and I'm not happy with the boots, so these are just screen grabs from modeler.

Any crits welcome

Scott

Skelegon_Key · 07-02-2003, 08:30 PM

Front wire ...

Skelegon_Key · 07-02-2003, 08:31 PM

Back ...

Skelegon_Key · 07-02-2003, 08:31 PM

back wire ...

Bobakabob · 08-02-2003, 01:10 AM

Well done - that's a very economical mesh and an authentic looking body shape. Can't see the hands too well - how about a render? Not an easy thing to do - though maybe work on refining the breasts a little more, they look strangely flat. Refreshing to see you've avoided the usual adolescent Lara Croft stereotype

philip · 08-02-2003, 01:19 AM

what he said! good work. I like the knees : )

get the brand new char tute and rig her

philip · 08-02-2003, 01:30 AM

...then again, judging from your name you probably won't need it anymore

Skelegon_Key · 08-02-2003, 02:23 AM

Bobakabob

Thanks, the chest area was meant to be a little flat as the top shes wearing was meant to be tight and flattening the chest area, but looking at it, I think your right, I've gone a little too far.I'll take a look at this. I've included some shots of the hands here. I'll render it when the texturing is done, still playing around with the UV maps

Philip
Again, thank you. Your McClaren tutorial rocks, hurry with part four please

:p

Skelegon_Key · 08-02-2003, 02:24 AM

hand top

Skelegon_Key · 08-02-2003, 02:25 AM

wire

Skelegon_Key · 08-02-2003, 02:26 AM

hand bottom

Skelegon_Key · 08-02-2003, 02:34 AM

top wire

Fallenswordsman · 12-02-2003, 01:19 PM

Hey there:

Looking good so far - I think the back could do with a bit more muscular definition. Its looking a bit flat. The creases in the palm of the hand look a bit too deep and pinched too.

Heh - I've done the same with my first human body models - all nicely hidden away - but I do still keep them just to show myself how truly terrible I once was.

Skelegon_Key · 13-02-2003, 08:38 PM

Fallenswordsman - thanks, it's great having another pair of eyes looking at something, I'll definitely define the back better and sort the hand, the hand is still pretty rough and needs some more detail on the knuckles and fingers, ah well ... back to tweaking !:p

Fallenswordsman · 14-02-2003, 08:34 AM

I think hands are about the next most difficult thing to get right after ears - especially with the folding of the skin at the joints. The thumb is a bit stumpy, but then I do have a friend who has a stumpy thumb just like that! Plus if you're feeling particularly masochistic and want to end up pulling out your hair, you could try making the little webs between the fingers. Best of luck with it.

08-02-2003, 01:10 AM	#5
Bobakabob Registered Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: England Posts: 42	Well done - that's a very economical mesh and an authentic looking body shape. Can't see the hands too well - how about a render? Not an easy thing to do - though maybe work on refining the breasts a little more, they look strangely flat. Refreshing to see you've avoided the usual adolescent Lara Croft stereotype __________________ Bob Szczerba "Gravity always lets you down"

08-02-2003, 01:19 AM	#6
philip Tutorial Clown Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 817	what he said! good work. I like the knees : ) get the brand new char tute and rig her __________________ Don't ever argue with idiots. They drag you down to their level and beat you with experience.

08-02-2003, 01:30 AM	#7
philip Tutorial Clown Join Date: Dec 2002 Posts: 817	...then again, judging from your name you probably won't need it anymore __________________ Don't ever argue with idiots. They drag you down to their level and beat you with experience.

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08-02-2003, 02:23 AM	#8
Skelegon_Key Full Access Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Leeds, England Posts: 28	Bobakabob Thanks, the chest area was meant to be a little flat as the top shes wearing was meant to be tight and flattening the chest area, but looking at it, I think your right, I've gone a little too far.I'll take a look at this. I've included some shots of the hands here. I'll render it when the texturing is done, still playing around with the UV maps Philip Again, thank you. Your McClaren tutorial rocks, hurry with part four please :p

12-02-2003, 01:19 PM	#13
Fallenswordsman Moderator Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 1,702	Hey there: Looking good so far - I think the back could do with a bit more muscular definition. Its looking a bit flat. The creases in the palm of the hand look a bit too deep and pinched too. Heh - I've done the same with my first human body models - all nicely hidden away - but I do still keep them just to show myself how truly terrible I once was.

13-02-2003, 08:38 PM	#14
Skelegon_Key Full Access Member Join Date: Jan 2003 Location: Leeds, England Posts: 28	Fallenswordsman - thanks, it's great having another pair of eyes looking at something, I'll definitely define the back better and sort the hand, the hand is still pretty rough and needs some more detail on the knuckles and fingers, ah well ... back to tweaking !:p

14-02-2003, 08:34 AM	#15
Fallenswordsman Moderator Join Date: Jan 2003 Posts: 1,702	I think hands are about the next most difficult thing to get right after ears - especially with the folding of the skin at the joints. The thumb is a bit stumpy, but then I do have a friend who has a stumpy thumb just like that! Plus if you're feeling particularly masochistic and want to end up pulling out your hair, you could try making the little webs between the fingers. Best of luck with it.