![]() |
#1 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Utah
Posts: 135
|
![]()
I'm working on a park for a scene with my little alien Bob over there on the left. I still need to add some trees and streets in the background, but this is what I have so far. You can't see it in this shot, but there is a moon and a cast iron sign at the enterance of the park. Any comments welcome. Thanks.
__________________
Yeah! er... umm... I mean... um... Yeah! |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#2 |
Full Access Member
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Oregon
Posts: 367
|
![]()
The lights don't seem natural. There is a really nice streetlamp in the downloads section.... that may help you just to see it. You need the surfaces to have a restricting effect on the glow, which I think can be done in light properties.
Otherwise it looks like a real good start. ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#3 |
Full Access Member
Join Date: Sep 2003
Location: Singapore,
Posts: 913
|
![]()
Hmm, lighting a bit more will be a good idea i agree.
(My personal idea will be,,,, volumetric lighting, some fog and poof you have a dark side to that park)... Hehehe. Good Luck |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#4 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: South Florida
Posts: 40
|
![]()
take away some of the streaks on your lens flare, and if the lights point down, there would be no flare from above.
__________________
www.CMProductions.cjb.net You might be a NERD if: Your toilet seat is web-enabled. |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#5 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Utah
Posts: 135
|
![]()
Thanks for the comments. I have started to re-do the lamp post in more of a decorative style. Leovenous, I looked at the download you mentioned. I agree that the lamp needed more pizzaz. I am also going to play with the fog idea. See what I can come up with. I hope to have an update here in the next few days when I have time to play with everything.
__________________
Yeah! er... umm... I mean... um... Yeah! |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#6 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Utah
Posts: 135
|
![]()
It's been awhile since I have been able to work on this, but I finally found some time and made some quick updates. These are nowhere near finished, but here is what I have. Comments are very welcome.
__________________
Yeah! er... umm... I mean... um... Yeah! |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#7 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Utah
Posts: 135
|
![]()
and here is a wider view.
__________________
Yeah! er... umm... I mean... um... Yeah! |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#8 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Utah
Posts: 135
|
![]()
sorry. here is the first one again.
__________________
Yeah! er... umm... I mean... um... Yeah! |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#9 |
Full Access Member
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Oregon
Posts: 367
|
![]()
Much better. A clear step in the right direction.
|
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#10 |
Full Access Member
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: Belgium
Posts: 109
|
![]()
you have to some A.A. !
looks good.
__________________
3d animation |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#11 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Oct 2003
Location: South Florida
Posts: 40
|
![]()
YES!! AA will make a Drastic difference in your picture.
I really like the far off shot, looks almost complete, Some trees would also help.
__________________
www.CMProductions.cjb.net You might be a NERD if: Your toilet seat is web-enabled. |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#12 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Utah
Posts: 135
|
![]()
Thanks guys.
I haven't added any AA yet. My computer is way to slow right now. I didn't want to sit for 10 minutes just to see if the placement was where I wanted it. I just wanted to see what these test renders would look like. Also, the trees are in progress. Those things are tough to model. ![]()
__________________
Yeah! er... umm... I mean... um... Yeah! |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#13 |
Super Moderator
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Sunbury, UK
Posts: 2,339
|
![]()
Try using a tree generation plugin (such as the Tree designer lscript up on this site). Also, you might want to check out Phil's Sunset tutorial as this explains a simple technique for creating trees:
First Part: http://www.simplylightwave.com/movie...tml?tut_id=506 The Rest: http://www.simplylightwave.com/movie...tml?tut_id=505 |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#14 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Utah
Posts: 135
|
![]()
Thanks Mark, I'll check it out.
__________________
Yeah! er... umm... I mean... um... Yeah! |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
#15 |
Registered Member
Join Date: Jan 2003
Location: Utah
Posts: 135
|
![]()
Some more addtions to the park. I added a few trees and placed a skytracer image behind. I still need to add a few buildings to fill the rest of the street, but I think I am close to done. What do you all thinik?
__________________
Yeah! er... umm... I mean... um... Yeah! |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||
Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
City Building... | jstarr976 | W.I.P | 6 | 25-10-2004 09:15 PM |
City | ShadowFox | W.I.P | 7 | 05-08-2004 05:14 AM |
MCU city | voices3d | W.I.P | 16 | 20-02-2004 01:33 PM |
Future City Co-Op WIP | Leovenous | W.I.P | 21 | 24-12-2003 02:31 AM |
Thread Tools | |
|