24-01-2006, 07:27 AM | #16 |
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To be honest, I think crits from me at this stage might be detrimental to your work - I think its probably best doing what you do and then we can see how things look once you've got the whole character together. I like the style of what you're doing right now without trying to make it look realistic, and I think the best thing you can do is continue on with what you are doing. Although having said that, her eyes now make her look tired and the meeting point of the collarbone seems to dip a bit too much, but apart from that, its looking fine.
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thanks for your comments fallenwordsman, i 'll have to tweak and adjust the tearducts i think, and you may be right for the collarbones, gonna check this too..
a body update.... i just created the basis.. need lot of tweaking
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Nice work...
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27-01-2006, 07:10 PM | #19 |
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Here are the legs and i did some tweaks to the global mesh
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i did a few adjustment on the whole body, on the eyes, torso, abs, back, Legs, knees, bottom (dont know how to say that.. butt?) and the arms.
i tried a shading too...
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Looks top notch!
The knees and the back of her legs are very well done. Good proportion overall. 5 stars :beer:
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Coming along great! You might want to address that little dip at the top of her tummy at some point, but other than that, its looking fine.
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a little update
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a draft of the hands
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really cool i like the hair strands
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thanks litemodeler,
i need to improve the hands.. the fingers has a alien like looking.. too long and there are a few improvment to do on the feets and arms.. then next i'll try to handle the clothes
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the body looks good to
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06-02-2006, 07:15 AM | #30 |
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I would seriously consider reducing the length of the fingers and unflattening the ends - I know hands are difficult at the best of times, but the fingers look way too long at the moment.
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